Workshopping 1st Drafts: Greg and Michelle

Greg: Strictly Strings

What to say? You nailed the dialogue and set the scene pitch perfect. Now what? This reads so well it could be a stand alone, but of course, our assignment is a long-form piece of work. For me, now that I find myself in the room with these 2 characters, I want to know why I'm there with them. Who are these people and what about this "project" appeals to them? I want to know if this is a lark and if so, what's in it for them? No matter the motivation or the outcome, this project will suck up time and energy.

When not in the studio, who are these people? Relationship outside the studio? Now that you've gotten my attention, I want to know more.

Loved the "projects scene" idea we discussed in class. Sets up their location as a character and a foil for their personas.

Do you want to interject you're take on this project?